I think it was very well drawn and done, but I think something like this is more appropriate on a site like youtube with all of the other speed painting vids.
While I agree that video games are often wrongly and inappropriately blamed as the cause of todays violence in youth, I think this presentation needed a bit more content wise. Other than stating things matter of factly, not much substantial evidence or solid research data was put out on the table. This IS a big subject, and a lot of research and debate is going on in the political world and in the industry, I wish this would have gone in more detail on this. Overall though, good job.
Yeah, that was one of the main problems. Thank you for your input.
Isn't "Madness" someone else's work?
You've shown some talent and done alright but isn't the Madness series the work of someone else?
I'm sure many people have made copies, clones, or something similar but I'd rather see the original artist's work and where he takes it.
I really hoped...
It was looking really good until the teapot thing and then the fin- which came up pretty fast. It looked really promising, I thought the beginning artwork and animation was sweet and I really hoped I'd get to see something cool.
Keep working at it, don't settle for doing just quick stuff or something random to try and keep from getting blammed, nor let yourself start a project and then fail to finish, or just make a junk ending to call it done. You have promise, I hope you do well.
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I enjoyed the show, it's great to finally see something with some decent audio and an actual coherrent plot on here.
Your audio was great, and the fact that the show was going somewhere or had a topic really helped. I think the artwork and animation really needs some help, it might be that you just need to put more time into it. Or you might consider finding someone else who's really talented in that area and partner with them.
It's a good start, and with the proper attention you could have a great series.
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